Everybody watching

October 18, 2012
By Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
10 articles 3 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times, so long as one remembers to turn on the light.


everybody's watching, everybody's waiting for me to make a move,just leave me alone!i wish I could run as fast as the wind so I don't have to be here,but I know I can't,(run away ) until i say goodbye but everyboby's gone so i can't run until i say goodbye, and when they finally reappear the words stick in my throat.So I turn away so the don't see the tears painting tracks down my face



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on Nov. 3 2012 at 7:32 pm
Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
10 articles 3 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times, so long as one remembers to turn on the light.

Thanks for the feedback and I'll use that advice the next time I write.I think that I could have gone into a lot more depth too.So thank you!

on Nov. 2 2012 at 9:37 pm
MissInkslinger BRONZE, Lexington, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
I love argument, I love debate. I don't expect anyone just to sit there and agree with me, that's not their job. Margaret Thatcher

  Not bad, but I wish you'd gone more depth. Who is speaking? Why? Also, the formatting is a bit weird. Overall, it's good and I can relate!  


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