everybody's watching, everybody's waiting for me to make a move,just leave me alone!i wish I could run as fast as the wind so I don't have to be here,but I know I can't,(run away ) until i say goodbye but everyboby's gone so i can't run until i say goodbye, and when they finally reappear the words stick in my throat.So I turn away so the don't see the tears painting tracks down my face
MissInkslinger
Not bad, but I wish you'd gone more depth. Who is speaking? Why? Also, the formatting is a bit weird.
Overall, it's good and I can relate!
Thanks for the feedback and I'll use that advice the next time I write.I think that I could have gone into a lot more depth too.So thank you!
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