September 18, 2009
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a couple weeks ago i had a dream. i dreamed that one day me and my friend were walking around jeramy ranch. when all out of the blue every one just left the golf course. so no one was their.. we went for a walk on the golf course the grass was so short and slippery. we saw a golf cart just laying their, the keys were sitting right thier so we thought a could just take it for a ride.

We got in the golf cart and my friend (jordan) was driving around the course.
She was a really good driver, well thats what i thought at least. it had been about fifteen minutes. Jordan and I thought it was getting boring so we left the golf course and went to the jeramy store. I had about five dollers, so we bought some push pops and went back to the golf course it was late at night about eleven o’clock. the golf cart was still their, so we took it for a ride. the lights were deffintly not light at all. but their was some light. We were just driving around when a bunny jumps out of no where! Luckly Jordan stoped the car as soon as she could and the bunny just hopped away.

we thought it was getting quite fun so we kept on going. We went for like another hour, as soon as we were think about leaving the golf cart an out of gas. so we started walking back to my house. we herd something and looked behind us and saw a HUGE moose just right behind us. We didn’t know what to do so we started running it started running after us! it was charging at us! haha. we lost it when we jumped into a bush this was getting to become quite the adventure. then i woke up.........

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4qui133 said...
Jul. 1, 2012 at 11:18 pm
Do you keep a dream journal? I like this dream/piece a lot, but if you keep a regular journal your recall will get better. The human mind has an amzazingcapacity for detail; I would not be so concerned with spelling as with capturing as much of the imagry as you can if you consistiantly record your dreams.
Cityboy13 said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 8:56 am
i thawt eet wuz guud but da spellink sukz
MidnightFire said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 7:46 pm
i had a dream once where i was on a life life size cloud board game and i turned into a ninja turtle. weird ... i think ur story ended well because dreams are suppost to be endless and make no sense ... so good job but u might want to work on details and spelling
Kilikilakia2012This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 6:06 pm
I think this needs a little editing and some details added in. You might like to try changing the end or adding more to it. This is fiction so who knows what can happen! :) You seem to enjoy what you write and that's always cool.
Healing_Angel said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 8:11 pm
Sorry, but I think this needs some work. The idea is good, but just spend a bit more time fixing it up.
soccercrazy said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 6:09 pm
i love when dreams have no point, and it's so much fun to tell them! lol
nickel3 said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 12:57 pm
this book sounds like a aventure and action sceen and activety i would dearly love to do. this i a book i would like to read.
writing fan said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 9:02 am
oh be nice i think it was good but u could of given alittle more detial but again it was really good :)
Screen name said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:57 am
There were many spelling and grammar errors. I know it is just a dream, but the story didnt flow very well.
amberluvspandas said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:54 am
I think that there could've been some more details because the entire dream seemed a little endless.
amberluvspandas said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 11:52 am
I think that there could've been more det ails because the whole thing was very endless.
sm72 said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 9:27 am
your story was not proof read and needed more details
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