The Untitled Romance

July 15, 2010
By Anonymous

She gave him her whole heart. But departed her he did. His body was lost, yet somehow, his spirit and his soul remained forever. It was his last wish, his last hope. Somehow she must know this, though locked inside her heart she keeps it, it shines through. His last words, his last breath was "I love you".
Her solemn promise to him kept it was. She walked along the river his ashes were scattered over, and didn't stop. Never did she rest, never did she have a home, for home was inside her heart, with him. To ongoing travelers, she appeared lost and scared. But in her heart, she found that she was neither.
Three days after his death, she died of starvation and lack of rest. She'd never stopped walking. And when her body fell, her soul rose. She was finally home again, with the man she loved more than life itself. All because of love...


The author's comments:
I watched a movie called Bright Star, and shortly after seeing it, I was inspired to write this.It is the first thing I submit to TeenInk.Hope you enjoy it!

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on Aug. 22 2010 at 7:36 am
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

i have posted more articles...four to be precise...and they just got out of pending approval......id appreciate if you guys would rate and comment on it...thnx!

minddancer said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 12:53 am
haha thnx :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:30 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

ah. very nice :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 5:04 pm
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

yeah,Lanier42.sorta kinda.i watched a movie then wrote it..lol not really a movie review more like randomly insipired paragraphs of intuition

on Jul. 22 2010 at 11:14 am
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

but it did show up in minddancer's profile. thats how i found it. i didnt feel like searching :) it was really good. but was this a movie review?

on Jul. 21 2010 at 3:26 pm
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

thnks Jessica!i will keep writing! :)

on Jul. 21 2010 at 1:13 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I loved it! It made me cry. It was beautiful keep writing:)

on Jul. 20 2010 at 5:41 pm
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

thnk u,thnk u :)

on Jul. 20 2010 at 2:43 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Wow, that was really really good!  Very sweet and flowing, and I love the meaning.  Excellent job.

on Jul. 20 2010 at 2:34 pm
LoveMeIfYouDare BRONZE, Lafayette, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I have many injuries. It is better not to talk about them." ~ Natalia Ma

awww.thts so sweet thnx a dreamer!!!i will next time..but a few of my others are still anonymous.ill keep u posted

on Jul. 20 2010 at 2:13 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

Great job, I really liked reading it! I can't wait til you post more!

[The reason that it didn't show on your profile is because you posted it as anonymous. You should put your name next time, you deserve to have people know you wrote this. :) ]


minddancer said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 8:56 am
i wrote this,but i was scared to put my name,so i put it anonymous.i wish i wouldve put my name!!!


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