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Oh Thy Beloved

Oh how tis goddess of beauty loves thee

Whith hair like silk and eyes of midday blue

Admiring you brings me wonderful glee

The love I have for you will stick like glue

Your radiant smile shines like the bright night

A voice like this must be an enchantress

Every word you say has some sort of light

A day without you has a lot of stress

Oh my beloved thou are fantastic

With love such as yours I shall never roam

You make every day enthusiastic

When with you I feel as if I'm at home

Thou hath made life a sweet experience

The joy caused by thee is greatly immense






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camogirl6sic6 said...
Mar. 30 at 10:11 pm
Dude this a great sonnet! You have a great talent, your sonnet is better than mine. I love your sonnet!
 
Angelina said...
Mar. 30 at 9:52 pm
I love it!! The poem is amazing, don't ever stop writing!!! You are very talented!!!
 
Terror22This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 30 at 9:45 pm
This is awesome Nick. I absolutely love it, and it makes me happy you have such a loving relationship. This poem is fantastic; love love love it.
 
IshaBuste said...
Mar. 30 at 9:32 pm
This is really good. The way the words fit perfectly together in the sonnet and the way you express your love for your girlfriend. I love it
 
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