It's Unbearable

July 3, 2016
By AskingSammie BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
AskingSammie BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could write as mysterious as a cat" - E.A Poe

The feeling of disappointment is left.
And a side of unforgiving sorrow.
You performed an act of happiness theft.
A wish to receive my heart tomorrow.
The broken smile left upon my face.
My eyes are stained from the helpless cry.
You made it very clear we need space.
And even though I still continue to try.
Aching my heart is to hear your soft voice.
You promised our love would last forever.
Packing your bags and leaving was your choice.
Your mind games and tricks were very clever.
Lost in life without I seem to be.
Alone I sat hoping you'll stay with me.

The author's comments:

I had written this in class after we had a lesson about Sonnets and how to set them up and we were then given a chance to make a sonnet of our own and I chose sadness. Writing this piece took lots of time and editing but I had finally come down to this. And I believe many people can and will relate to this.  

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