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August 8, 2015
By NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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is like a puzzle piece
not by colors or lines

with hearts
and dedication.

It holds together
like the solar system
that is beyond our reach.

it is the most powerful  force
that is stronger than any wind or fire.

is what all of us seek and want,
for it is a magic of nature and our well being. 

Without it
there would be just a black hole
pulling in all the nativities and the destruction.

To eventually
just to fall out like one of the stars
that leave space hitting the earth crust making a silent echo of death.

No longer
to be apart of the sky anymore
but just to be an outcast meteor down from space.

But everything and everyone
has a place where they belong even the outcast meteor
that brought the green and blue colors to life with many other mixture of colors and shapes. 

This mystery puzzle piece
that is beyond our understanding
but it is one with us and we know it belong in this world.

For it the magic of nature
and wonder for it kept us alive for all these years
and you thought it was just a rock when it was a masterpiece of life.   

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ash_scarwood said...
on Sep. 19 2015 at 9:39 am
ash_scarwood, Abu Dhabi, Virginia
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Its really good Fell in love with it

on Sep. 6 2015 at 1:13 am
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this is so good. you're very talented!!!!!!!!

on Aug. 29 2015 at 11:25 pm
mahomie_d BRONZE, Lewisville, Texas
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this is amazing!!

on Aug. 22 2015 at 2:27 pm
CheshireKitty1 BRONZE, Terrace, Other
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This is a very nice poem

Franc1s BRONZE said...
on Aug. 21 2015 at 8:41 am
Franc1s BRONZE, Oakville, Other
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Great poem!

on Aug. 19 2015 at 1:43 pm
KaiteysWritings BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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"Our motivation is the momentum that pushes us up the hill of life."

I really like this. The words are very well chosen and mean so much. Good job!

on Aug. 18 2015 at 11:58 pm
AnnaSharudenko BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
Words have no power to impress the mind without the exquisite horror of their reality. -Edgar Allan Poe

I like your use of words and the deep meaning of the whole poem. Great job! Mind comment on my newest writing piece called "Strange Friend" also?

on Aug. 18 2015 at 9:36 pm
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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I thought this website will help you because of what I saw on your profile. But what I think you should write about is thunder storm or about nature if you into poems like me.

stlfd1 said...
on Aug. 18 2015 at 8:33 pm
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Absolutely fell in love with this piece!!

JQuail14 GOLD said...
on Aug. 18 2015 at 4:07 am
JQuail14 GOLD, Sac City, Iowa
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Its not about how many breaths you take but how many moments take your breath away! <3

You have great talent! I love this piece.

Hariny BRONZE said...
on Aug. 17 2015 at 12:10 pm
Hariny BRONZE, Maurai, Other
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That is a really poem!!!Can you please comment on my poem also?!

on Aug. 16 2015 at 6:45 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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Thank you for commenting on my article! Will do the same for yours:)

on Aug. 16 2015 at 5:04 pm
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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This is a really great poem:) mind commenting on my article why you should give this piece an editor's badge? Thanks it would mean a lot!

on Aug. 16 2015 at 4:02 pm
LawyerFlash12, St. Paul, Minnesota
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Great job!

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