WoW that was very well written and very descriptive. I love the way you write and chose the perfect words so easily to create such a beautiful or should I say "Marvellous" master piece. As for the topic, you chose an important one. It was really deep, strong and full of truths. I can see that you have a pure perception of the things in life. And that is the one that a writer needs to be a rreal writer (if it ever makes sense lol) Cuz so a writer can really leave an impact on the others, well he/she should have a pure, deep and truthful perception for anything in this life. A real writer doesn't see anything shollowly, he/she sees deeper and surely what the others couldn't see. That's how a writer can reach people's hearts and it's surely what you did here with this poem of yours. It's certainly one of my favorites. It was like a huge Wake Up Call. Thank you for sharing this inspiring poem ^_^ You really are gifted so keep it up ;)