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Legend of Anonymity

May 26, 2015
By Qinziyue BRONZE, Great Neck, New York
Qinziyue BRONZE, Great Neck, New York
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How many masks do I have? I don’t know!
Golden, Silver, Bronze and Steel
I even have several to cover my soul
Now no one can know how I feel

Wandered in hell, realm of darkness
Embraced by demons and witnessing all the sins.
When I met Satan, “All hail your highness”
I said while I secretly scorned his dirty skin.

Visited heaven, world of glory.
Danced with angels and sang freely.
“Pious child! Welcome to my territory! ”
But how can a friend of demons be godly?

Then I stood on the highest crest to mock people’s credulity.
Then I cried hysterically for the death of my real personality.



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on Jun. 4 2015 at 11:18 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

No problem. And I love giving feedback because it's encouraging; I know how you feel. Keep making great poems like this!

on May. 31 2015 at 8:02 pm
Qinziyue BRONZE, Great Neck, New York
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I am so glad that you love this poem! Thanks for your comment because this is the first comment I receive!

on May. 31 2015 at 12:20 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

Wow! I would love to give positive-sounding feedback, but I won't lie. This is absolutely terrifying and chilling, yet I can relate to a certain extent in my own way. This is haunting and I love it; great job!