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A simple servant in my fist
A royal goddess of the words I think,
Equally adept at words’ removal
and seeking my mind’s approval.

Erases all the struggles and scribbles I make,
Graceful sweeps, twirling gently like a snowflake.
Gradual movements in a frosty air.
Skating in a charming way, but leaving behind a slight impression.

Pressing the end firmly on plain white paper.
Demonstrating its boldness by a confident solid line.
Elaborating patterns that are stunning to behold.
Vigorous swirls and curves that are barely controlled.

Slowly erasing the last piece of his tender soul.
A battle of ferocious emotions, demonstrating a desperate bleak hole.
Handicapped with half its function
And thrown away without compunction.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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HammadWaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 16, 2016 at 9:20 am
Really great @AnnaSharudenko will you check and comment on my teen ink video work named,"The Unbeatable Breakdancer"?
 
elycavill This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 6, 2015 at 8:44 pm
This is really really great! The expression and the flowing of words! :)
 
KiraVogt2896 said...
Sept. 4, 2015 at 8:11 pm
Great poem! :)
 
thisEmilyda1 said...
Sept. 4, 2015 at 6:15 pm
great poem, i agree with all the other comments. but aren't sonnets supposed to have ten silabols in each line, i don't know because i'm not a very talented poet, i was just wondering. keep it up! :)
 
Orabilis said...
Aug. 31, 2015 at 6:37 pm
I feel like this poem was made for me. I can relate so much..
 
Shayjg said...
Jun. 18, 2015 at 3:38 pm
This is a wonderful poen
 
Shayjg replied...
Jun. 18, 2015 at 3:39 pm
..... poem
 
TheComet said...
May 8, 2015 at 2:54 pm
I don't know what to say, I'm speechless! This is so beautiful, stunning and so poetic I love the way you write and illustrate actions and moves so beautifully. You are trully gifted ^_^ I also thoroughly agree with you, sometimes we tend to look for so much bigger things to express ourselves and let our voice be heard, while in fact we don't even appreviate the tiny little things that helped us begin our trip. It's just amazing, please carry on, you have so much more to say and if you'd like ch... (more »)
 
LazyGenius said...
May 7, 2015 at 3:57 pm
I really do love the passion you write with! Fantastic write!
 
SierraSpears said...
May 6, 2015 at 9:09 pm
This is really good!
 
WritingFrenzy said...
May 6, 2015 at 4:17 pm
@Anna_Sharuda You have a really unique writing style, you write about Life and put all those lessons/feelings/thoughts into very captivating words. I would say keep writing and NEVER give up. A gift can be furthered through practice!
 
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