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Beginings
November 7, 2014
There will be new beginings;
Just see for yourself.
Whenever you feel like givin' up,
All you have to do is beleive in yourself.
There will be new beginings,
So that you know,
Whenever you're feeling down,
Know you are not alone.
There is much in life ti live for,
Just see for yourself,-
'Cause you aren't the only broken hearted person in this world.
© Tim K., La Crosse, WI
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This article has 10 comments.
Jonah Halbert GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2014 at 7:09 pm
Thank you so much! I am glad to be a part of teenink!
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2014 at 12:35 pm
I truley enjoyed readin this, darlin. It is well written, and it says a lot. Just the other day actually someone said everyone has their own tragety they are dealing with, some people are just better at hiding it than others. That may have been a quote I saw actually... Either way, it reminds me of this poem. I do love how you say we aren't alone, there are other broken hearts in this world. It really is inspiering to be reminded of that. THank you so much for sharing this :) Keep writing, dear ^^
Jonah Halbert GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:18 am
Ok. Would you be okay with giving me some ideas and topics to write about? That would help me alot. Thanks for supporting me!
Jonah Halbert GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2014 at 10:17 am
ok. I would like it if you could give me some ideas on what to write about.
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 12 2014 at 8:28 pm
No problem! If you need any more help with anything, let me know and I'd be glad to help.
Jonah Halbert GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2014 at 3:30 pm
Thanks so much! That is my motivation to write.
Nightingale74 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2014 at 3:02 pm
Thank you for brightening my day with this poem, Jonah!! I especially loved the line, "When ever you feel like givin' up, all you have to do is believe in yourself," because I think it is so true. When you need someone to believe in, believe in yourself. Because you're always going to be there for yourself, even when no one else is. I really hope others take this poem to heart because I know I have!
Jonah Halbert GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2014 at 12:36 pm
I have already got about 5 other poems posted on teenink. Look 'em up! By the way, thanks 4 the feedback. I will keep that in mind next time I write a poem.
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 12 2014 at 12:32 pm
Cute first stanza! I love the rhyming. Maybe write "giving" instead of "givin'" to make it a little more sophisticated. I really like the ending line; its chilling and mysterious. Keep the rhyming going thought! It seems so unfinished without an ending rhyme. Maybe adjust the other lines around the last one so you can keep the last one. Besides some minor spelling errors, nice job. I'll look for more from you in the future.
Jonah Halbert GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2014 at 10:33 am
Please tell me your thoughts on this.
I hope you take this to heart. This is the truth.