March 6, 2014
By Junior_Girl_10 BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
Junior_Girl_10 BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on." - Robert Frost

From the dark halls of confusion, rise up
And taste the sweetness of awareness.
Be gone the anxiousness of being stuck
Come the manic feeling, come carelessness.

Needing help I wallow here in darkness
Awaiting my savior, oh love, please come.
Calling out for someone in my likeness
While I wonder if there even is some.

The walls are starting to close in around.\.
Freezing on the spot, panic in my eyes,
Jumping up I begin to pound and pound.
No hope, no hope, the screams begin to rise.

I realize there is nothing there to find
If only I knew this was in my mind.

The author's comments:
I have begun to dabble in some sonnet writing. I hope it's good? I just tend to write whenever I need to vent. It's a very good outlet.

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on Mar. 9 2014 at 7:39 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Describe yourself in three words."

This poem is very well written. It`s eerie and disturbing and gets you to thinking where the mind doesn`t usually go. I like the last stanza the best, it`s really creepy and makes no sense and all sense at the same time. Five starzzz!!


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