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Whispers

November 14, 2013
By darkchild97ashleyg BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
darkchild97ashleyg BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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Whispers surrounding me,

Wrapping me in a blanket,

Taking hold unexpectedly,

Making me forget.

Everyone thinks I’m crazy,

But I know more than them;

But unlike all others,

I never speak on a whim.

Listening closely,

And never letting go,

Words ones forget,

I always know.



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Blynn SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2013 at 12:57 pm
Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
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this does sound kinda dark haha it is interesting though!

on Dec. 3 2013 at 12:22 pm
darkchild97ashleyg BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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Thanks!!! But im sorry about it sounding demonic though. When I write, I write what I am feeling. When I wrote this poem I was feeling lonely, depressed, and most of all misunderstood and underestimated.

on Dec. 3 2013 at 12:18 pm
darkchild97ashleyg BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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thanks im sorry about it sounding demonic, though. i didn't intend for it to be like that. when i write i write what im feeling at that moment. i was feeling very depressed, lonely, and VERY misunderstood.

on Nov. 19 2013 at 1:32 pm
PurplePandaPoo BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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I like it but it sounds a little demonic.