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There is pain flowing through me
It's been here for so long
There is pain flowing through me
Always singing a song

There is pain flowing through me
It refuses to hide
There is pain flowing through me
It puts an ache in my side

The pain is taking over me
It's going to swallow me whole
The pain is taking over me
And Its starting to take a tole 

The pain is taking over me
Never letting me have peace 
The pain is taking over me
Why, why won't it cease 

The pain is locked inside me
The key is buried far to deep 
The pain is locked inside me
always continuing to seep

The pain is locked inside me 
It won't go away 
The pain is locked inside me
And I think it's here to stay



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Midnight5765This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 6, 2013 at 7:26 pm:
I like the repition that you used. It was very easy to see through and i wish there was more!  
 
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Shade3043This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 20, 2013 at 1:49 pm:
I liked it! It has great imagery, a rhythm that works, and emotion coursing through it! :D The only complaint is that it's repetitive. A mistake I admittedly make a lot. :p Still, great poem! 4/5.
 
maelstrom14 replied...
Aug. 20, 2013 at 1:53 pm :
Thank you shade :) i kinda ment to do that but it is repetitive and the ideas are a little repetitive i like doing different stuff :) i apreciate the feedbacks
 
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