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We are wild animals in this big world
Don't you think everything is strange for us?
Speaking without thinking makes our mind twirl.
Can we do something that will help change us?

In this life we’re here just a little time
People think that's a reason to be bad
We do a lot of things, even bad crimes
This is stupid and it makes me so mad


If we stop acting like little children
We will change and demonstrate we still can
We need to stop judging and be friends
Stop doing crazy things, create a plan

We fight as one, we'll be victorious
Never give up, we will be glorious.



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chestac said...
May 28 at 9:43 am:
 Yey  we arewild animal,  nice poem my favorite, you have a lot of talent :D \(¤¤)/
 
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IlovemeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23 at 4:51 pm:
hey I think you've done an amazing job in this poem. Keep writing! Check out some of my work too!
 
JoshiSora replied...
May 23 at 5:15 pm :
Thank you! <3 okay, i'll check it. 
 
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FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 23 at 3:42 pm:
so true and amazing i love the last stanza the most amazing keep it up
 
JoshiSora replied...
May 23 at 4:06 pm :
Thanks :') <3 I will! 
 
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sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 23 at 3:19 pm:
wow so true. i really liked this. Keep writing, and check out some of my writing??
 
JoshiSora replied...
May 23 at 3:28 pm :
Thanks :') <3 I will check your writing! 
 
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Kary.Michelle. said...
May 22 at 11:07 pm:
Just gorgeous! <3
 
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KaryMichelle said...
May 22 at 10:53 pm:
Just wonderful! 
 
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