We can change

May 21, 2013
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We are wild animals in this big world
Don't you think everything is strange for us?
Speaking without thinking makes our mind twirl.
Can we do something that will help change us?

In this life we’re here just a little time
People think that's a reason to be bad
We do a lot of things, even bad crimes
This is stupid and it makes me so mad

If we stop acting like little children
We will change and demonstrate we still can
We need to stop judging and be friends
Stop doing crazy things, create a plan

We fight as one, we'll be victorious
Never give up, we will be glorious.

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Amanda I. said...
May 2, 2015 at 10:40 am
This is so great. Oh my goodness, you'd love my poetry, I write about the SAME stuff. You're definitely going on my favorites.
chestac said...
May 28, 2013 at 9:43 am
 Yey  we arewild animal,  nice poem my favorite, you have a lot of talent :D \(¤¤)/
Iloveme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2013 at 4:51 pm
hey I think you've done an amazing job in this poem. Keep writing! Check out some of my work too!
JoshiSora replied...
May 23, 2013 at 5:15 pm
Thank you! <3 okay, i'll check it. 
Fallenoutofgrace said...
May 23, 2013 at 3:42 pm
so true and amazing i love the last stanza the most amazing keep it up
JoshiSora replied...
May 23, 2013 at 4:06 pm
Thanks :') <3 I will! 
sarah98 said...
May 23, 2013 at 3:19 pm
wow so true. i really liked this. Keep writing, and check out some of my writing??
JoshiSora replied...
May 23, 2013 at 3:28 pm
Thanks :') <3 I will check your writing! 
Kary.Michelle. said...
May 22, 2013 at 11:07 pm
Just gorgeous! <3
KaryMichelle said...
May 22, 2013 at 10:53 pm
Just wonderful! 
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