January 29, 2013
By , Minnesota Lake, MN
I strive to see you every day and night.
Knowing the time is near we will stay strong.
I want to see you cause’ you are the light.
People try to say to believe is wrong;
Are we really free to our religion?
If we were, then we could speak it in school.
They don’t understand the constitution!
If we could speak it that would be so cool.
They teach evolution; they don’t get it.
It is based off of opinion not fact!
I don’t think that we came from a cricket!
They teach that we also come from a cat.
I don’t know about you but that sounds dumb!
Oh yeah! We came from a chimpanzee bum!

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DreamingOfNirvana said...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 12:01 am
My favorite was the part about chimpanzee bum. :)
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Feb. 4, 2013 at 5:41 pm
Thank you oops... i guess i'm not anonyomous anymore:) but thank you for the comment i chose that because i've seen so much writing that really doesn't have a conclusion so i wanted to end mine with a statement and again thanks:)
DreamingOfNirvana replied...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 6:59 pm
Haha no prob! I really like the poem and definitely the chimpanzee bum. Its funny and a very good conclusion. APPLAUSE.
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