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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."



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AlisaBelongsToCalivin said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 11:55 am:
I love it it soo beatiful  
 
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littlekittynekocatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 8:39 am:
wow thats really amazing
 
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loveshersheys said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 8:30 am:
I love this poem! It's beautiful!
 
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royalujjwa4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 7:34 am:
just beautiful!
 
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Kiry12 said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 2:54 am:
this is BEAUTIFUL
 
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country-cutey said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 12:01 pm:
i love it its pretty
 
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emma_sue_luvs_u said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 11:46 am:
I LOVE your use of personification! It makes it so interesting and insightful! :) <3
 
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. said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 10:39 pm:
wow so pretty and, dare i say it, poetic  
 
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MannytheLarry said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 10:38 pm:
This is really good...I feel like I'm in location
 
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MonsterGirl2000 said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 2:12 pm:
verry good!!!!!!!
 
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augustsummerflingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 11:27 am:
Beautifully written :) I love moonlit nights too :) if you're a THG fan, im guessing you'll like this - TeenInk.com/fiction/fan_fiction/article/518005/Mockingjay--Epilogue-Part-1/ :) leave a comment if poss :) thankss :)
 
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JadedHeart said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 11:21 am:
heyy, that was really good. You should consider putting it in the watty awards on wattpad. 
 
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baileyanne said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 11:01 am:
I like how you are very creative and really captivating! AAMMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGGG :)
 
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L-Dizzle said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 10:15 am:
THIS GREAT I LIKE ITTT
 
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Koehler said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 9:53 am:
Very good you definitly know how to write a poem :) keep going
 
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SamanthaLynx said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 10:57 pm:
I love the word choice you have there and the description through detail is rather lovely and I quite enjoyed reading it.
 
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ScarlettRose390 said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 10:57 pm:
This poem is automatically great because it has the word fornight in it. Seriously though, this is nicely done. :)
 
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colton,rudloff said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 2:03 pm:
that was really good  im not much of a poem person but that was good!  
 
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AmieLeeHope-Sierra said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 11:31 am:
I loved this poem so much. XD
 
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I_Play_In_TrafficThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 9:14 am:
This was one of the best poems I've ever read in my life, it was very well written you should be proud of your self!!!
 
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