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After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."



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Hourglass said...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 12:03 pm:
Its awesome Wonderfully writtern  Its very well versed and meaningful makes you wanna feel all the words as your own 
 
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Hourglass said...
Feb. 4, 2013 at 11:57 am:
Wow Its wonderful. Beautifully written , Your expressions are very well versed 
 
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EnnaGirl said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 11:05 pm:
This is really good ham! my favorite definitly! keep up the good work
 
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Darylism said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 11:05 pm:
Just brilliant, as a gothic poet enthusiast, I completely understand your love for the moonlit night and seeing it as beautiful instead of dark and evil like most people.
 
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Tenikae said...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 8:44 am:
absolutely brilliant! keep going strong k? :)
 
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dancing.inthe.rainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 27, 2013 at 10:59 am:
I love it! I already have an obsession with the moon and I think you described it beautifully. I like your style and can't wait to read your other work :)
 
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HeatherSemb said...
Jan. 23, 2013 at 11:20 pm:
I can connect with the way you describe moonlight. There is nothing like a full moon and the glow is assends upon the world. Your adjectives are truley beautiful and your sense of imagry is amazing. Thank you for sharing your work (:
 
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amandatheshadowgirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 23, 2013 at 12:08 pm:
this is amazing! i love the imagery you put in there, keep it up muh freand!!!
 
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sunshine said...
Jan. 22, 2013 at 5:46 am:
great poem
 
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LinkinPark12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 21, 2013 at 11:57 am:
....And then the sun comes up and swallows them whole. On a more serious note, the poem is really good, it made me feel peaceful and I swear I could hear the nightingale... ;)
 
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WhiteSwan13 said...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 11:02 pm:
Nice Poem!
 
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BeccaRodwell said...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 11:00 pm:
WOW! :)
 
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Michellebrain said...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 10:35 pm:
wow, this was absolutely beautiful... I loved it :) you're so much better than me lol
 
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Sumayah_Arcusa said...
Jan. 18, 2013 at 10:38 am:
This poem makes me feel very calm. I feel safe, and unharmed. When I close my eyes, this poem is a life I have imagined of.
 
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breona_blue_baroudi said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 12:19 pm:
i like this poem a lot ..... it just brings a feeling of love so exotic and natural (very good)
 
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Poetic_Admirer said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 12:19 pm:
This is a really good poem. Keep up the good work!
 
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Poetic_admirer said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 12:10 pm:
This is a really good poem. Keep it up.(:
 
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Yuani said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 10:12 am:
I love poems on nature especially the beautiful night sky with stars. I love this!!!!
 
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Deamer_ said...
Jan. 15, 2013 at 10:16 am:
Really good! 
 
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waterbendercarorainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 12:26 pm:
amazing and beauitful :)
 
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