Slavery of Love

December 11, 2012
By KaylaRich11 PLATINUM, Hackensack, Minnesota
KaylaRich11 PLATINUM, Hackensack, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Second place is always the First loser.


Being a slave what should I do but wait
For your call to me,
I put everything on hold; it's no debate
To my heart you have the key.

I don't care what my friends say
I just want you happy,
I will help you with no delay
Whether my friends do or don't agree.

I try not to be jealous
Thinking aboutt what you do without me,
I try not to be overzealous
I just want you to be happy.

Though I'm your slave
It's what i want to do,
This is all because
I'm in love with you.



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on Apr. 28 2013 at 6:40 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Very interesting. I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes. Also it seems like maybe you were dwelling on the friends aproval thing a little to much. Maybe you could try expanding. 

on Apr. 5 2013 at 11:14 am
KaylaRich11 PLATINUM, Hackensack, Minnesota
26 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Second place is always the First loser.

That's ok. But thanks for the advice:)

on Mar. 24 2013 at 9:16 am
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

Pretty good but if this is from personnal experience and I assume it is, don't slave for a guy. Be yourself and if he doesn't love you for who you are then he doesn't deserve you. Sry for the late reply to my forum, haven't been on for a while.


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