Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Slavery of Love

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Being a slave what should I do but wait
For your call to me,
I put everything on hold; it's no debate
To my heart you have the key.

I don't care what my friends say
I just want you happy,
I will help you with no delay
Whether my friends do or don't agree.

I try not to be jealous
Thinking aboutt what you do without me,
I try not to be overzealous
I just want you to be happy.

Though I'm your slave
It's what i want to do,
This is all because
I'm in love with you.



Join the Discussion


This article has 3 comments. Post your own!

Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 6:40 pm:
Very interesting. I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes. Also it seems like maybe you were dwelling on the friends aproval thing a little to much. Maybe you could try expanding. 
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
ZoeyMarie said...
Apr. 5 at 11:14 am:
That's ok. But thanks for the advice:)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
RolledthestoneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 24 at 9:16 am:
Pretty good but if this is from personnal experience and I assume it is, don't slave for a guy. Be yourself and if he doesn't love you for who you are then he doesn't deserve you. Sry for the late reply to my forum, haven't been on for a while.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback