What You Need to Know

May 23, 2012
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Your laughter is like music to my ears,
Your smile is like the golden sun mid-day.
If you are happy, I will have no tears.
Your joy, it makes me glad in ev’ry way.
When I’m with you, my heart is filled with joy.
The cold, deep darkness of my heart is lost.
Anyone who hurts you I would destroy,
Trouble to help you, I would pay that cost.
A bad day where ev’rything is all wrong,
When it feels and seems like I have no hope,
You give me the courage to remain strong.
It’s amazing how you help me to cope.
If you went away, you need to know this,
Thanks for being great, it’s you I will miss.

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writer3499 said...
Aug. 17, 2012 at 8:42 am
Really great!! This is an amaizng first sonnet! My first sonnet is called "Midnight Fright" if you want to check it out.  But this is awesome! Loved it,  this deserves 5 stars!
so_joy said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 8:30 pm
Great! This is a great addition to Romeo and Juliet. Although, I do think you said "joy" once too many, and it is starting to sound a bit repetetive. Aside from that, you did a fanatstic job. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
shaylapurple16 replied...
Aug. 12, 2012 at 10:29 pm
Thanks so much for reading! This was my first sonnet, thanks for the tip, next time I'll try not to be repetitive :) I would love to read your stuff. Thanks again for reading!  
Akilah said...
Jul. 19, 2012 at 5:19 pm
I like this poem.  Makes me think about my mother.  I wonder who you are talking about. Once again, good job!
shaylapurple16 replied...
Nov. 14, 2012 at 4:50 am
Thank you!  
christyyy1999 replied...
Dec. 19, 2012 at 8:57 am
I know who she's talking about... ;)
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