the power of spoken words

May 16, 2012
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As the dark consumed her soul
She tried to wear the mask of might
She was a very lonely girl and sole
That she built a tower far away from the sight
A far away land where she smiles from the inside out
And that's how she survived day and night
By that's instills in her deeps fear and doubt
And that's destroys her, by the weapon of sleight
Poor little girl forced to be mature
That's when everything became obscure
Those curse at her and those yell
And that was the circle of hell
The power they obtain to demolish her tower
Poor little girl she died before blooming into a flower
The power they have, what a might unjust power
The power of spoken words, oh this mighty destructive power

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azmi said...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 11:07 am
hope you are fine :)
omniya134 replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 3:12 pm
thank you i am :)
sandysoul said...
May 23, 2012 at 6:27 am

amazing poem it's funny they didn't publish it on teenink magazine

i loved the way you described your feelings just amazing job :)

omniya134 replied...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 9:24 am
thank you so much :) i appreciate your comment a lot  i hope they'll publish it.. maybe not yet :)
Sunshinebeauty said...
May 22, 2012 at 5:38 pm
Amazing poem i love it so much if they are smart they'll publish it cuz its so beautiful
omniya134 replied...
Aug. 25, 2012 at 9:25 am
thank you :) it' means a lot to me 
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