Darkest Love

March 31, 2012
By asdfghjocelyn BRONZE, San Jose, California
asdfghjocelyn BRONZE, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
No one cares how much you know , until people know how much you care .


Is it he that she looks at with mistrust ?
Her heartbreak not the first but the most tough
Their kiss not the first but the most rough
Yet she is so hopelessly devoted
Still she can't pull herself apart from dark
'Til her love has boasted , vows decoded
Now she is left there to sit and lark
After she was beside him in despair
Forlorn by her own love gashing her life
Her heart so damaged it can't be repaired
Yet she still thrives to be that dog's life long wife
With her eyes so blind that she only sees
All glasses half empty , that musn't be .

The author's comments:
Well I hope teens can relate to this sonnet becuase it is written about a heartbreak that you still want to go back to . And especially in teenage years it is common , so I hope the audience can relate .

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on Apr. 22 2012 at 1:30 pm
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

I read this, and it reminds me of a friend of mine. I'll give her this poem to read and maybe she will finally see clearly. Nice sonnet by the way, I love it.

lolparkin said...
on Apr. 9 2012 at 11:07 pm
I think this is beautiful ! Amazingly written .


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