Heartbreak nightmare

March 16, 2012
By Nothingiseverything BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
Nothingiseverything BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
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Heart break is like a nightmare
Hurt over and over again, night by night
You stare into a world of white closer and closer
you feel the bite
There is no gain in feelings of happiness
The words he spoke now feel the shot of a gun
Pain is just the feeling
But that the words that begun the beginning.
Life feels over before the end
But the bare of loving you still kills me
But the knife you left in my heart still lives
But I still care and I leave a tear
The night continues even if it hurts
But I believe in the end


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on Mar. 22 2012 at 7:42 am
DaisyAngel BRONZE, Sandy Springs, Georgia
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This was really interesting! Five stars! Will you consider reading and commenting on my poem, if you have the time?


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