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Less is More

November 30, 2011
By niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Isn't it funny how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the pieces?"
"It's easy to stand in a crowd, but it takes courage to stand alone"
"What would you attempt if you knew you could never fail?"


Such an intriguing face to glorify,
A perfect shadow from your silhouette,
It is said that the soul is seen through the eye,
To my dismay, you haven’t proved wrong yet,
Disregard the rules, you have your own beat,
Your heart beats humble, reaching me within,
You bring out my best, but our ends don’t meet,
Less more than none, let it be paper thin,
Cry as I watch sand slip through the hourglass,
You don’t understand, you have not a clue,
I shall try to reach you before I pass,
My last words, I promise, will be of you,
I hope you accomplish what you wish for,
When with you, less is definitely more.


The author's comments:
this is iambic pentameter; following abab cdcd efef gg

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