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Falling Out

September 7, 2011
By Anonymous

I've fallen out of love,
And into the dark,
I dance in the night,
And I make my mark.

I've fallen out of happiness,
And into dispair,
I swim in sadness,
And drown quietly there.

I've fallen out of smiling,
And into Crying,
I've fell into frowning,
And I've just started dying.

I've fallen out of love,
And into the dark,
Leaving a sad sadistic mark,
Just dying in the night,
Never smart enough to fight for my own life.

© Anonymous

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it was a really dark time in my life.
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brenthewren GOLD said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 11:20 pm
brenthewren GOLD, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
the only thing you have to do in life is die
music makes everything better

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thank you !
classicStara PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 12 2011 at 8:07 pm
classicStara PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
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i really liked the beginning, it went so well together. I also liked the last line. nice work