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my loving mother

August 23, 2011
By justintreharne1 BRONZE, Cinnaminson, New Jersey
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Sonnet poem
I am truly lost without thee
Like a pup without its mother
I wouldn’t know where to go or what to see








Ill never be able to follow another
I love my mother so very much
She guides me through thick and thin
When I am sick she has the curing touch
When I lost she makes me feel like I will win
She knows what to say when everything has gone wrong
She can get mad from time to time
And she makes me wonder where those bad thoughts have gone
But she can make me feel like a lime
You can turn your back and act very mad
But she will never ever think your bad

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i wrote it about my mom
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:40 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
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Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
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A wonderful tribute!