Goodbye

August 1, 2011
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When I hear the news my heart is hollow
My eyes full of tears, my face full of sorrow
The world seems to be moving slower and slower by the moment
I know I could've done better; I just wish I would've shown it
Depressed and defeated, the world looks bleak
I wish I was back in my heyday; life at its peak
And all I wish for and want is another chance
But I know it is futile; I've danced my last dance





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HannSawyer15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 9:48 am
This one is my favorite! I love how you tied everything together and I actually imagine this being read like a spoken word! I don't know if that's how you planned it but thats how I pictured it. Nice job! :)
 
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