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July 14, 2011
By FacingFate SILVER, Worcester, Massachusetts
FacingFate SILVER, Worcester, Massachusetts
6 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I wish I was someone other than me, fighting to make the mirror happy." ~ Bethany Dillion


When it feels no one's ever there for you
When you feel lost and can't find your own way
When you are so scared, you don't know what to do
When you don't think you can make it through the day
When you mind is just one mess of confusion
When you feel you're completely on your own
When it seems it's all a lie or delusion
When you fear you're in this completely alone
When you feel trapped and can't find your way out
When what they did left you you scared on the floor
When your head is clouded by pain or doubt
When you feel you can't take it anymore
There is no reason for your feelings to hide
Because in me, you can always confide

The author's comments:
Trust is a hard thing to come by, but I promise that I will earn yours <3

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on Jul. 29 2011 at 9:17 pm
MickiHeart BRONZE, Rutland, Massachusetts
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dance as though no one is watching."

OH GOODY! :D

on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:36 am
FacingFate SILVER, Worcester, Massachusetts
6 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I wish I was someone other than me, fighting to make the mirror happy." ~ Bethany Dillion

Thank you :) and I'll try.

Atarla GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 12:41 pm
Atarla GOLD, Portland, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason, And nothing is without one

You're very welcome, keep up the good writting ^-^

on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:03 am
FacingFate SILVER, Worcester, Massachusetts
6 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I wish I was someone other than me, fighting to make the mirror happy." ~ Bethany Dillion

I appreciate this comment and I am very glad you found my poem to be relatable. It means a lot to me :)

on Jul. 23 2011 at 10:03 am
FacingFate SILVER, Worcester, Massachusetts
6 articles 8 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes I wish I was someone other than me, fighting to make the mirror happy." ~ Bethany Dillion

Haha! Took me a minute to figure it out until I saw the name. Thank you. I think I am going to post more poems as I write them :)

on Jul. 22 2011 at 4:48 pm
MickiHeart BRONZE, Rutland, Massachusetts
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dance as though no one is watching."

LUV it! I can really relate to this one. idk why u never showed me THIS one  :) add more poems!!!! <3 OH YEA! guess who :P

Atarla GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 3:48 pm
Atarla GOLD, Portland, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything happens for a reason, And nothing is without one

Really good you express the pain of getting your trust broken very well. I like I can completely relate to this piece. =)


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