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A Passion

May 5, 2011
By Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote


No feelings can compare to the ones you have for me.None can touch the ones I have for you.When i see you I flutter with glee,For to you,no harm i can do.To you my love is true.

When you walk down the street i cant help but to stare,It's you i want to meet with your soothing hair.Your midnight blue eyes put me in a daze,and you posses a great personality which purifies my heart and takes the pain away!!!!!!!


The author's comments:
I just felt love

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on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:37 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

alright.thanks for the input

on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:36 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

thanks.although i wrote this randomly

on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:06 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

The words are good, but the way your poem is organized looks too jumbled. I would suggest that you separate the lines, so it doesn't seem like a first draft.

on Jan. 5 2012 at 2:56 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

well lets say 4:00 pm.......next monday.....if you feel comfortable with giving me your email then can u give it to me because other wise we cant talk

on Jan. 4 2012 at 2:57 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

alright then ill corect myself the next time

on Dec. 24 2011 at 2:51 pm
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

love stinks and everyone just keep checking on here...im trying to publish more frequently now...hope you enjoy

on Dec. 19 2011 at 5:33 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Knock knock who's there we are" by Daniel Beaty

Okay u give me a time and date

on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:41 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

Aww this is adorabley cute :) love it muches

on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:51 am
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

thanks everyone....i do my best.....music missy...i think we should talk more....i have a few questions to ask you

on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:50 am
Frenchie15 GOLD, Northcharleston, South Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Show no love, and feel no pain"...self quote

i think so too

on Dec. 10 2011 at 6:51 pm
musicmissy SILVER, Orlando, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Knock knock who's there we are" by Daniel Beaty

Awww i think im in love with you

on Dec. 9 2011 at 3:05 pm
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE, Cleghorn, Iowa
1 article 19 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is one roller coaster we never get off of. It will go up and down, but never stop." -Me

"Life's A Climb, But The View's Great." Miley Cyrus

A girl needs to be so lost in God a guy has to seek Him to find her.

It cute and sweet! Good job on it!

on Dec. 8 2011 at 4:22 pm
Lovestinks1395 GOLD, Plainfield, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
God save us everyone we will burn inside thefire of a thousand suns.

That was beautiful and creative. Continue writing, I would love to see more work from you!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:05 pm
simbaspride SILVER, Keene, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You were born an original, don't die a copy" John Mason

Cute. <3 I really like it. 

5/5 

Some grammatical errrors but other than that it's great. :) 



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