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A Passion
May 5, 2011
No feelings can compare to the ones you have for me.None can touch the ones I have for you.When i see you I flutter with glee,For to you,no harm i can do.To you my love is true.
When you walk down the street i cant help but to stare,It's you i want to meet with your soothing hair.Your midnight blue eyes put me in a daze,and you posses a great personality which purifies my heart and takes the pain away!!!!!!!
© Daniel M., Phoenix, AZ
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This article has 14 comments.
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:37 pm
alright.thanks for the input
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 1:36 pm
thanks.although i wrote this randomly
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 9 2012 at 6:06 am
The words are good, but the way your poem is organized looks too jumbled. I would suggest that you separate the lines, so it doesn't seem like a first draft.
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 2:56 pm
well lets say 4:00 pm.......next monday.....if you feel comfortable with giving me your email then can u give it to me because other wise we cant talk
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 2:57 pm
alright then ill corect myself the next time
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 2:51 pm
love stinks and everyone just keep checking on here...im trying to publish more frequently now...hope you enjoy
musicmissy SILVER said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 5:33 pm
Okay u give me a time and date
FatesMistake13 said...
on Dec. 13 2011 at 11:41 pm
Aww this is adorabley cute :) love it muches
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:51 am
thanks everyone....i do my best.....music missy...i think we should talk more....i have a few questions to ask you
Frenchie15 GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:50 am
i think so too
musicmissy SILVER said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 6:51 pm
Awww i think im in love with you
TheGracefulWriter BRONZE said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 3:05 pm
It cute and sweet! Good job on it!
Lovestinks1395 GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 4:22 pm
That was beautiful and creative. Continue writing, I would love to see more work from you!!!!!!!!
simbaspride SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:05 pm
Cute. <3 I really like it.
5/5
Some grammatical errrors but other than that it's great. :)
