High School Lovers

April 21, 2011
By ThisDoesntHurt BRONZE, Hartford, Wisconsin
ThisDoesntHurt BRONZE, Hartford, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"We are we pretend to be." Kurt Vonnegut ...... "Your worst enemy cannot harm you as much as your own unguarded thoughts." Buddah ..... "They can't break me as long as I know who I am." From the song I'm Still Here, by John Rzenik of the Goo Goo Dolls


The freshman girl,
Oh so shy,
Sits and watches the sophomore guy.
The sophomore boy,
With his head in a whirl,
Sits and watches the junior girl.
The junior girl,
In her red sedan,
Sits and watches the senior man.
But the senior man,
All hot and wild,
Secretly loves the freshman child.


The author's comments:
Revised version. Enjoy!

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on Jan. 28 2012 at 9:48 am
Silent.sea.of.voices. DIAMOND, Lawson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Impossible is just an excuse for people who have given up.- My older brother

Very interesting and unbelievably true. Btw did your screenname use to be JustAlice?

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on Nov. 23 2011 at 4:10 pm
pinkowl BRONZE, Tyrone, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Jeremiah 29:11

wow, this was awesome.  i love how it flows so well, and how it really made me think about people. thanks for inspiring me!

on Jul. 2 2011 at 3:51 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

LOL. it's funny how people cannot see the people who likes them because their eyes are focused on someone else..

Anyway, this isn't actually a sonnet. A sonnet is made of 14 lines with rhyme scheme and meter..

But this poem is just so goo I have to give it four stars.. :)


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