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Oh Romeo, each time I look upon thee

I witness Cupid’s arrow in action

With your valiance and chivalry

You give my heart divine satisfaction

You’re a blissful dream as I lie in bed

I beseech never to be awoken

For surely if I do I will be dead

Gone, and forevermore unspoken

Like the sun on a summer’s day you shine

You’re the halcyon moon in the night

My deepest desire is you being mine

And for you to remain always in sight

Darling, ‘til tomorrow for I must depart

Remember you will remain in my heart

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jessicags said...
May 5, 2011 at 3:40 pm:
Loved it:)
hermi1rox replied...
May 5, 2011 at 3:42 pm :
Thank you :)
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vampier said...
May 5, 2011 at 7:46 am:
i thank that you did a goooooood job and i looovvveeedddd your poem a lot even thow i wright free vris poem.....
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wordnerd54This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 4, 2011 at 9:44 pm:
Sonnets are hard to write!  You did a really nice job; great vocabulary, especially for a sonnet.
vampier replied...
May 5, 2011 at 7:47 am :
your right lol...!!!!
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