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Love of Time

March 30, 2011
By Anonymous

The day I met you my heart took a leap.
It was like a rollercoaster, screaming down some hill that’s very steep.
Life stood still when you kissed me for the first time.
It was a sweet thrill forever till the end of time. Time.
I love our time together our love is pure.
Baby you’re like an addiction, and there is no cure.
Life is surrounded with the beautiful sound of song.
Because I am meant for you I was all along


The author's comments:
Its about the love of life.

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on May. 2 2011 at 12:48 pm
hillary polley SILVER, New York
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i dont know how i tried can you tell me how?

Thank you for commenting it means a lot to me


mlynch BRONZE said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 8:18 am
mlynch BRONZE, Summit, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift. That's why they call it present."

I really liked this poem!! Great job writing this!!! 5 stars!! If you have time, could you check out my story "Just Like My Mother"? Please comment and rate it cause I need all the feedback I can get. If you like it, I would appreciate it if you could check out my other works, too. Thanks and great job!!!