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Love Struck

March 10, 2011
By Desiree Rudnick BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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LOVE STRUCK
Few minutes with you seem to last forever
When you kiss my lips they seem to go numb
I can’t be without you whatsoever
When I’m close to you I start to go dumb
What have you done? You have got me love struck
I’m loving this, I never want a break
Imagine how much my left lung has shrunk
From the space my heart continues to take
I have felt the spark light up in my heart
Let’s do this thing for real, no turning back
Our love is a beautiful piece of art
Say “I love you” or I’ll have an attack
You give love a brand new definition
I can handle you despite the mission

© Jen S., Schroon Lake, NY

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