Costless Love

February 7, 2011
By Jacob59 BRONZE, Greeley, Colorado
Jacob59 BRONZE, Greeley, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I love it when it rains, because no one can tell when you cry."-Me (it is part of a poem that i wrote


Wondering through time
All but lost
Looking for love not worth a dime
It is so bountiful it must have no cost

Longing to get where I am going
To end this life’s long journey
Only I don’t know where I’m going
My heart is breaking from yearning

Twas the night I found you true
‘Tis the time to show my love
Like my blood it runs true
Like the soft white wings of a dove

For hath this love ever been truer
From the mornings dawn was heart caught by your lure


The author's comments:
This is just a regular sonnet that I wrote about love.

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GoodCritic said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 4:30 pm
He used a delicate "way of words". He is a very young boy for this good of poetry.

Jacob59 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 9:35 pm
Jacob59 BRONZE, Greeley, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I love it when it rains, because no one can tell when you cry."-Me (it is part of a poem that i wrote

Thank you every one! =)

JEnglish4949 said...
on Apr. 6 2011 at 9:24 pm
I am always amazed by Jacob's intensity of feeling, especially at his age. He is truly a talent to be reckoned with over the years.

on Apr. 6 2011 at 4:09 pm
Jacob is a real good person.


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