January 15, 2011
Confused and lost in her thoughts
Trying to separate thoughts
But ends up making them worse.
She can never get a solid idea in her head
She tries to make one
But just sits there and cries.
She goes with the flow
And says what she wants to who she wants.
She cant stop and think or else it turns out worse

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Karma_Crow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2011 at 7:58 am

This is quite wonderful and I enjoy it.


Keep up the good work ^^


I ask once more of one thing...if you can look at my writing. Rate it/coment, it does not matter.

lilred1025 replied...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 5:08 pm
Okay and thank you. if you would look at some of my other stuff that would be cool too
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