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Dreams of the Insane

I fear the times when I am left alone
My thoughts return to horrors from before
The pain seems to have a mind of its own
It takes control and cuts me to the core
At night I dream of what should not be dreamt
What is the cause of the visions in my head?
Did Angels or demons watch as I slept?
Are they messages from someone long dead?
Am I insane? Am I losing my mind?
What have I ever done to deserve this?
A consequence of cruelty or being kind
What is the meaning I somehow missed?
However random or horrific they seem
I always pray that it was just a dream




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PleaseSmileIfYouAreReadingThisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 10:16 pm:

Hey I remember u from a long time ago. yeah, Im always changing my screen name now; you probly dont remember me....

but I LOVED ur poem!!!! its goes together amazingly- love the rhyming, I totally get this, Awesome job

 
Supernova7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 2:13 pm :
Thanks:) what was your old screen name?
 
ByThisBlindingLightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 3:27 pm :
lol I dont remember the one I had when I spoke with you, sorry >.<
 
Supernova7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 12:19 pm :
It's fine:)
 
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Alon_Freevoice said...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 9:37 pm:

"Are they messages from someone long dead?"

I think this should be "Are their messages from someone long dead?"

Just change they to their.. and that's all.. 

Great poem, by the way.. i like sonnets.. i rate it too...and this poem is kind of like my poem called Insanity...


(sorry, i wasn't able to count syllables.. )


 
Supernova7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 11:48 am :
Ok:) thanks for the feedback I appreciate it
 
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