Dreams of the Insane

January 1, 2011
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I fear the times when I am left alone
My thoughts return to horrors from before
The pain seems to have a mind of its own
It takes control and cuts me to the core
At night I dream of what should not be dreamt
What is the cause of the visions in my head?
Did Angels or demons watch as I slept?
Are they messages from someone long dead?
Am I insane? Am I losing my mind?
What have I ever done to deserve this?
A consequence of cruelty or being kind
What is the meaning I somehow missed?
However random or horrific they seem
I always pray that it was just a dream



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on Nov. 15 2011 at 12:19 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

It's fine:)

on Nov. 10 2011 at 3:27 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

lol I dont remember the one I had when I spoke with you, sorry >.<

on Nov. 10 2011 at 2:13 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanks:) what was your old screen name?

on Nov. 8 2011 at 10:16 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Hey I remember u from a long time ago. yeah, Im always changing my screen name now; you probly dont remember me....

but I LOVED ur poem!!!! its goes together amazingly- love the rhyming, I totally get this, Awesome job


on Sep. 2 2011 at 11:48 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Ok:) thanks for the feedback I appreciate it

on Jun. 23 2011 at 9:37 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

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‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

"Are they messages from someone long dead?"

I think this should be "Are their messages from someone long dead?"

Just change they to their.. and that's all.. 

Great poem, by the way.. i like sonnets.. i rate it too...and this poem is kind of like my poem called Insanity...


(sorry, i wasn't able to count syllables.. )




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