Night-time Sky

November 15, 2010
By Breannamartxp SILVER, Erial, New Jersey
Breannamartxp SILVER, Erial, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about the breaths we take, but the moments that take our breaths away."


We met in the grass that night a little over nine
You layed next to me, and said you missed me
Then your hand gently crawled into mine

You told me that night the sky was especially dark blue
I looked towards and said there was also something I miss
After that, I slowly moved myself closer to you
Moments after we both shared an amazing long kiss

I looked up into the night-time sky
Remembering every little detail there was
Then I noticed a shooting star flying by

In my head I made a wish to myself, without letting you know
My wish was that you and I would be together forever
Then you looked over and told me how much you loved me, so

I smiled, threw my arms around you and started to cry
You held me closer than ever not letting go until’ I was done
Then you sat me up and asked me why?

I sat up, looked you in the eye and told you today’s my last day here
You looked at me with your beautiful eyes in confusion
Then you moved away from me and said wait, you’re moving?


The author's comments:
One night I was laying in the field with my boyfriend and I had to move that night. Turns out I didn't, but it's still a memory that I turned into a meaning-ful poem. Hope you enjoy!

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on Dec. 7 2010 at 8:01 am
Breannamartxp SILVER, Erial, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about the breaths we take, but the moments that take our breaths away."

Thankyou. Heh. :)

on Dec. 7 2010 at 8:00 am
Breannamartxp SILVER, Erial, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about the breaths we take, but the moments that take our breaths away."

Thanks, and he was. Heh.

on Dec. 4 2010 at 12:00 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

This is so beautiful! 

I'm glad it worked out :)


on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:22 pm
CountryGothic GOLD, Somersworth, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Once something has been said, it cannot be said in other words." -Aristotle

Awwww, such a sad poem :( I'll bet he was very happy to find that you didn't have to move after all.


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