Open Wounds (Forever a Memory)

October 22, 2010
My wounds are open,
The blood is flowing,
Hurt again,
But it won't be showing.

I'll keep it all
Keep it all inside,
For no one to see,
It'll be my burden to hide.

I'm ashamed to say,
I love you,
After what you did,
With whatever you may do.

I may be just a distant memory,
A ghost of your past,
But the memory of you,
Forever will it last.

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uncaring-unknowing-unthinkingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 2:13 am
your work just as always is great. its interesting that your other work is no longer up but its still great.
aznskills90214 said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 7:11 pm
I honestly had to post twice. For some reason I really like the rhythm you have in your first stanza.
aznskills90214 said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 7:03 pm
Wow, I like the rhythm you have in the Stanza 1,2 and 4. Kinda weak in 3..But good job
GuardianAngel13 said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 12:41 pm
Omg. This is the one that speaks my heart :) amazing work, keep writing  :)
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