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By , Ormond Beach, FL
Bring me the sunset in a cup,
rich and frothy fill me up.
Just a mug, nothing much,
I've never craved anything of such.
My belly full of warmth and care,
Should I share?
Could I share?
By giving the world a little piece,
I provide them with a little peace.
Of mind, of heart of soul,
causing a diminish of inner cold.
All with just one little cup,
so please, oh please, won't you fill me up?





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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 9:25 am
Sweet poem~ it warmed me up inside:)
 
wefellinLAVA said...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 1:56 am
Cute little poem. c:  Well written.
 
LilStinka said...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 2:57 am
Haha that's awesome!! It makes me happy just to read it...it really shows how just a little kindness can make a person's day that much better XD

btw how long did you have to wait before yours was posted?
 
Fallen4Ever replied...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:20 pm
Ya.....thats what i wanna know cuz i posted one and...it is still waiting =(
 
SLADANYI replied...
Oct. 27, 2010 at 9:26 pm

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Hm, I want to say it was a week or two before i recieved an email notification that my writing was published onto the site. I hope you two hear form teenink soon! :-)

 
Fallen4Ever replied...
Oct. 28, 2010 at 8:04 pm
o ya i forgot to add...this poem is truelly amazing! You did really well and i hope to see your writing in the teenink ink magazine and more! Well done!
 
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