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Full of Light

October 13, 2010
By Anonymous

Bring me the sunset in a cup,
rich and frothy fill me up.
Just a mug, nothing much,
I've never craved anything of such.
My belly full of warmth and care,
Should I share?
Could I share?
By giving the world a little piece,
I provide them with a little peace.
Of mind, of heart of soul,
causing a diminish of inner cold.
All with just one little cup,
so please, oh please, won't you fill me up?

The author's comments:
My creative writing assignment really spoke to me.

Hope you like it!

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on Mar. 8 2012 at 9:25 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Sweet poem~ it warmed me up inside:)

on Oct. 28 2010 at 8:04 pm
Chiconey BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Life...is Chess, just because you begin the game as a pawn, doesn't mean you can't finish it as a king"~Ethan Allen Hawk

o ya i forgot to add...this poem is truelly amazing! You did really well and i hope to see your writing in the teenink ink magazine and more! Well done!

on Oct. 28 2010 at 1:56 am
wefellinLAVA PLATINUM, Copper Cliff, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'you touched my heart, through it's shell'

Cute little poem. c:  Well written.

on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:26 pm
SLADANYI BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
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Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Hm, I want to say it was a week or two before i recieved an email notification that my writing was published onto the site. I hope you two hear form teenink soon! :-)


on Oct. 27 2010 at 9:20 pm
Chiconey BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Life...is Chess, just because you begin the game as a pawn, doesn't mean you can't finish it as a king"~Ethan Allen Hawk

Ya.....thats what i wanna know cuz i posted one and...it is still waiting =(

on Oct. 27 2010 at 2:57 am
LilStinka SILVER, Lynden, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Advice is what we ask for when we already know the answer but wish we didn't. - Erica Jong
Tis an ill cook that cannot lick his own fingers. - Shakespeare

Haha that's awesome!! It makes me happy just to read it...it really shows how just a little kindness can make a person's day that much better XD

btw how long did you have to wait before yours was posted?