Extremely Horrible

October 9, 2010
This feeling.
This unbearable feeling.
This unbearable feeling of despair.

The unbearable.
The horrible unbearable.
The horrible unbearable longing to be with you.

How horrible.
How extremely horrible.
How extremely horrible the thought.

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letmypeoplego198 said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 12:58 pm
Without a doubt, this clump of words is the worst, most pathetic excuse for a poem mine eyes hath ever beheld.  For the love of unleaven bread, stop writing poetry.
singingdetective said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 7:09 am

The repetition is wonderful :)

reminds me a little of Edgar Allan Poe talking about the despair, longing, and the horrible thoughts.

Fantastic job! :)

watercat replied...
Oct. 20, 2010 at 10:03 am
Thank you very much! Edgar Allan Poe is one of my favorite writers. I will read some of yours as well! :)
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