To My Innocent One

August 10, 2010
By syed954 BRONZE, Coral Springs, Florida
syed954 BRONZE, Coral Springs, Florida
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Halt! Be cautious of arms in which thou wish to reside
Contain no latent arms of mistrust or jealousy inside.
Once confirmed of no such arms, varnished and moist thy lips shall be
At late hour thy wishes to expel thine lips of virginity.
Slightly tilt thy head mirroring that position this great planet lies
Shut thy lids vanishing thine lover from thy eyes.
Go gentle into the heavens of love that is thy leman’s arms
Softly meet lips as element meets ripples in ponds.
Cradle each other ‘till late the dew drops
Float gently in that embrace ’tis thine heart beseeches thee to stop.


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Olivia said...
on Sep. 16 2011 at 10:13 am
cute ! <3

Linz07 said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 8:55 am
Aaaawwwwwwww

Babygirl08 said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 7:18 am
This was sooooooo sweet!

on Sep. 28 2010 at 5:35 pm
passion.fable14 SILVER, Fort Collins, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a cup of coffee. You gotta...dive right in and drink it fast before it cools. Because coffee sucks when its cool. And it tastes like crap. Do you want your life to taste like crap Sam? I don't. That's why i don't drink coffee."
~~Carlt

I love the voice and passion in your wordds!!! LOVE your style!!!

jennyboo said...
on Sep. 16 2010 at 2:39 pm
OMG! U seriously just put Shakespeare to shame.

Lauren said...
on Sep. 14 2010 at 3:03 pm
awwwwwwwwww. that was so sweet!

on Sep. 9 2010 at 11:37 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I'm speechless! You are a wonderful writer! You put me to shame lol

alexa3334 said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 6:47 pm
simply amazing

Jikky.T said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 6:41 pm
Wow, what a touching poem. I love the imagery and the old english you used, it really brought out the essence of the poem! Keep writing =)

on Sep. 8 2010 at 7:00 pm
I just melted after reading this poem. 

rubez said...
on Sep. 8 2010 at 10:17 am
omg!!!! i luv this poem!!!!! keep up the good work!

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:16 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

GREAT JOB I LOVE IT KEEP WRITING!!

 


on Sep. 6 2010 at 8:23 pm
OMG! How romantic!




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