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My Fail of a Sonnet

Looking in his eyes, my heart starts to say,
“Your smile is like the waxing sunshine,
Brightening my life just like a bouquet.
Your face is moonlight, unique, and divine.”

Because he is himself he’s not a blur.
Unlike a fire, his flames never die.
As sweet as salt is not, he sends me a fleur.
Just like a turtle his brain will not fry.

When I am near you my mind is a bird.
Around you I’m in love-caused denial.
Oh, how I fret when your voice is unheard,
And your presence is gone for some long while!

No matter, this man remains in my mind,
So no other is as great of a find.



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Artst123 said...
Sept. 12, 2010 at 8:58 pm:
hi! I haven't been on in a while, but here I am! I'm going to be submitting more art soon, so hang tight! nice sonnet! Who is it about?
 
pfgoldfish13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 3:16 pm :
I won't tell.  It's a secret, sorry.
 
Artst123 replied...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 3:25 pm :
okay then! But I will still geuss!
 
pfgoldfish13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 4:47 pm :
Eric, I'm not gonna tell you anyways, so don't bother.  Why do you want to know so badly?
 
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