My Fail of a Sonnet

August 4, 2010
By bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Looking in his eyes, my heart starts to say,
“Your smile is like the waxing sunshine,
Brightening my life just like a bouquet.
Your face is moonlight, unique, and divine.”

Because he is himself he’s not a blur.
Unlike a fire, his flames never die.
As sweet as salt is not, he sends me a fleur.
Just like a turtle his brain will not fry.

When I am near you my mind is a bird.
Around you I’m in love-caused denial.
Oh, how I fret when your voice is unheard,
And your presence is gone for some long while!

No matter, this man remains in my mind,
So no other is as great of a find.



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on Sep. 14 2010 at 4:47 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Eric, I'm not gonna tell you anyways, so don't bother.  Why do you want to know so badly?

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:25 pm
Artst123 SILVER, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, throw them back and tell life to make its own lemonade.
When life gives you melons, you know something is wrong

"I write to create
In the world’s massive novel
A page of my own"

-By Emily M., NW Washington, DC

okay then! But I will still geuss!

on Sep. 13 2010 at 3:16 pm
bass_rockrgrl13 PLATINUM, Burlington, Massachusetts
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I won't tell.  It's a secret, sorry.

on Sep. 12 2010 at 8:58 pm
Artst123 SILVER, Burlington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, throw them back and tell life to make its own lemonade.
When life gives you melons, you know something is wrong

"I write to create
In the world’s massive novel
A page of my own"

-By Emily M., NW Washington, DC

hi! I haven't been on in a while, but here I am! I'm going to be submitting more art soon, so hang tight! nice sonnet! Who is it about?


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