You Put Me On Trial

August 2, 2010
By XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns


On the evening nights when you take my hand
And you whisper into my ear at night
Your soft song throws me into a new land
Where even in dark, I can see your light.

Yes, I know I'm guilty; I love your smile
Anyone can accuse me of this crime
But only you can put me on trial
You would definately be worth my time.

So I guess I'll have to turn myself in
I hope they'll quickly open my case
Because I know, for you, that I will win
Then I'll come home to your arms, a safe place.

Your touch is what I long for in this room
But hope with me we'll see each other soon.


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on Feb. 26 2011 at 8:47 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Yeah.  And it's okay.  I'm always slow with a lot of things.  Haha

MKimmi said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 5:25 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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I get it, so it's that missing feeling that inspired you, right? Im pretty slow at this because I don't have a boyfriend

on Feb. 24 2011 at 5:28 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Hahaha Yeahhh. ;)

And yeah.  I kindof wrote it that way so other people could still relate to the poem, you know?  So they could interpret it in their own way.  =]  So whether it's some silly little girl like me missing her boyfriend from camp, or another person missing someone from war, either way works.  (I think. =])


MKimmi said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 1:10 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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oh, u writing about ur boy friend? ;DD

because it kinda reminded of like a man going to war or something, like u wont see him ever again, that made me kinda sad


on Feb. 22 2011 at 11:41 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

Noo, no, he's not leaving.

The story is, I was at a summer camp, and I was away from my boyfriend.  Haha  This was a writing camp, and our teacher told us it had to be about love, so naturally... This is what I though of.  =]


on Feb. 22 2011 at 11:40 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

(I'm so sorry I didn't reply to this sooner; for some reason it didn't send to my e-mail.)

But thank you so much. =]  It's one of my first attempts at a sonnet, so I was a bit scared of how it would turn out.  Haha


MKimmi said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 6:22 pm
MKimmi, NY, New York
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its sorta sad, is he leaving?

on Feb. 4 2011 at 2:17 pm
pinkypromise23 PLATINUM, Cranston, Rhode Island
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i know that you believe you understand what you think i said, but im not sure you realize that what you heard is not what i meant.

i love your rhyming style, and i really like the last two lines...oh and great analogy:) keep writing!


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