You Put Me On Trial

August 2, 2010
On the evening nights when you take my hand
And you whisper into my ear at night
Your soft song throws me into a new land
Where even in dark, I can see your light.

Yes, I know I'm guilty; I love your smile
Anyone can accuse me of this crime
But only you can put me on trial
You would definately be worth my time.

So I guess I'll have to turn myself in
I hope they'll quickly open my case
Because I know, for you, that I will win
Then I'll come home to your arms, a safe place.

Your touch is what I long for in this room
But hope with me we'll see each other soon.





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MKimmi said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 6:22 pm
its sorta sad, is he leaving?
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 11:41 pm

Noo, no, he's not leaving.

The story is, I was at a summer camp, and I was away from my boyfriend.  Haha  This was a writing camp, and our teacher told us it had to be about love, so naturally... This is what I though of.  =]

 
MKimmi replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 1:10 pm

oh, u writing about ur boy friend? ;DD

because it kinda reminded of like a man going to war or something, like u wont see him ever again, that made me kinda sad

 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 5:28 pm

Hahaha Yeahhh. ;)

And yeah.  I kindof wrote it that way so other people could still relate to the poem, you know?  So they could interpret it in their own way.  =]  So whether it's some silly little girl like me missing her boyfriend from camp, or another person missing someone from war, either way works.  (I think. =])

 
MKimmi replied...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 5:25 pm
I get it, so it's that missing feeling that inspired you, right? Im pretty slow at this because I don't have a boyfriend
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Feb. 26, 2011 at 8:47 pm
Yeah.  And it's okay.  I'm always slow with a lot of things.  Haha
 
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 2:17 pm
i love your rhyming style, and i really like the last two lines...oh and great analogy:) keep writing!
 
XxDream_in_ColorxX replied...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 11:40 pm

(I'm so sorry I didn't reply to this sooner; for some reason it didn't send to my e-mail.)

But thank you so much. =]  It's one of my first attempts at a sonnet, so I was a bit scared of how it would turn out.  Haha

 
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