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Alone

July 19, 2010
By Anonymous

Stuck between here and the middle
Confusion takes over my mind
Its like I’m helpless, its like I’m little
Something hit’s me and then I’m blind

Unaware of my surroundings
I just want all of this to end
If only I could wish upon something
I need a hand, I need a friend

Standing by my lonesome without direction
Wanting to wake from this nightmare
I’m on my own, I need protection
This feeling is nothing that I can compare

Father and mother come out if you dare
Tear me from this pain, of which I can no longer bare


The author's comments:
i wrote this while my parents were going through a divorce and i had to choose whether to stay with my mom or my dad.

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on Aug. 30 2010 at 10:10 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Wow.Just wow. I continuously read your work, and you never disapoint... Well done. I appreciate you sharing your poetry. It is a real treat to me. (:

on Aug. 29 2010 at 2:38 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

oh my goodness. wow. this is such a strong piece!! i love all the emotion put into this, and all the truth. it's like you really put all your feelings into all those words :) this is amazing!! 5 stars all the way :) would you mind commenting on some of my newer stuff? thanks, and keep writing :)