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If the world were to end tomorrow,
what would be your greatest sorrow?

If the world were to end tonight,
what would you have gotten out of life?

If the world were to end next week,
who's kiss would've made you weak?

If the world were to end right now,
what would you wish you could turn around?





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Hmmmm said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 12:50 pm
Very good! Maybe try and lengthen it. But awesome job!
 
PaolaC. said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 6:13 pm
Loved the sentiment behind it!
 
sunrise_faerie said...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 11:32 pm
great job 
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 6:54 pm
This poem is comprised of so much truth, and in the form of great rhythm. Thank you for writing it.
 
Lyrics said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 2:51 pm
this is great so simple but so meaningfull, thanks for letting people enjoy it so muchh.
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 12:03 pm
I love this captain. and i love you for writing it. it has such a great message. and its relatable. do your dance captain.
 
jazzy2classy replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 1:53 pm
this really is good
 
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