Life is like a Stair Case

June 18, 2010
By ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥


Life is like a stair case . .
Full of steps to take .
Full of moves you must make .
To get where you want to go
By taking just one step at a time . .
To get there , is like trying to climb . .
A mountain so high just to get up there to say . .
I made it . . I finished . . No matter what obstacles were in my way .
I did it . . I completed my task . . I've done what I had to do
To take one step at a time . . and make it through .
I've walked up that stair case , I've made it to my dream .
Life maybe tough at times and its never what it seems .
But if you keep your head held high , and put a smile on your face .
You'll make it to the very top because . . . Life is like a stair case



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Kaitt PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 7:30 pm
Kaitt PLATINUM, Petersburg, Virginia
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this poem has a great meaning and it is really wonderful. i think that you should try poems that don't rhyme, you are such a good writer and you have a great flow, you would do wonderful with writing free verse (:

on Sep. 17 2010 at 3:33 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

this poem is sooo true.

on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:08 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

Thank youu =]

on Aug. 25 2010 at 4:05 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

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"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Your poem reminds me of Langston Hughes' poem "Mother to Son" The famous lines of..."Life for me ain't no crystal stair..."

This is great. Keep writing hun!


on Aug. 23 2010 at 8:43 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
16 articles 2 photos 100 comments

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life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

Ya, i love this! can you rate and comment my work too! thanks

 


on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:47 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awesomely said. :) life is like a staircase

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:23 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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~~Isn't it funny how the most important things in life aren't things?~~

with *liliofpeace* i mean

on Jul. 29 2010 at 9:22 pm
waywithwords GOLD, Forest Hill, Maryland
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~~Isn't it funny how the most important things in life aren't things?~~

agreed!! :)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 12:46 pm
bakedbeans PLATINUM, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
People often ask me "why are you so fast?" and my reply was "ask a basketball player why he or she keep making three point shots in a row or ask a football player why is he so good at breaking tackles. its practice!!! common sense idiot!!!" Charles.C

this is nice. can you look at my work and tell me what you think about it thanks

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:33 pm
Excellent job!

on Jul. 15 2010 at 3:40 pm
DustyCheyanne<3 SILVER, Excelsior Springs, Missouri
7 articles 3 photos 36 comments

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Its going to hurt, before it feels better. Trust me.. Its worth it.

This is really good (:


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