May 6, 2010
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My calloused hands chase the bones of your spine.
Deafening heartbeats were silenced beside
Your eyes. Why was every thought lost inside
The wells of your soul? Bodies intertwined,
Our inhibitions would muffle themselves
Against sweat soaked sheets. But the sun is too
Hot today. Leaves cast shadows in the new
Spaces between us. We are not ourselves.
The pulse of our hearts shatters the silence,
As you turn and take my palm from your spine.

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Rae_Flies_with_Byrds said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:20 pm
The way you put your words together is very flattering for this piece.  All the adjectives are wonderfully chosen and give alot of vision to the poem.  Beautiful, ♥Rae
roxymutt said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 10:43 pm
wow this was very good! i liked the details and maticulous wording! i loved the picture that went along with this as well! great!
.blackbird.singing. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 7:22 pm
wow, this is really great. I love the passion that this piece has. Your words are really alive. great write!
Inherinerd said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 5:53 pm
this is really good!!!!
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