May 5, 2010
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Communicate your ideologies
Intrinsic values echoing the norm
And as a pool of liquid mercury
These poisonous reflections start to form.
Our previous sane morals start to fade
And heresy instead now fills our minds
The good samaritan who offered aid
He dwells in hell, and now with Satan dines.
Religion fades as does all right and wrong,
A gloominess descends upon the earth
Our weary moans form one macabre song
And so come to destroy remaining mirth.
Within one mind this plague has spread at lengths
Diminishing all disillusioned strengths.

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magic-esi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 27, 2010 at 7:26 am
This is SO good. The way you form your words and construct your lines is something few people are able to achieve. It's a really amazing poem. I also agree with what you said in the little blurb next to the article. I never really thought about people's view of sanity before, but what you said is true.
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