The World is Wrong

March 28, 2010
The sun reflects onto the pale moon lake
The homeless lay quietly, taking in sleep,
While other in the world are wide awake
And one lover looking for someone to keep.

Soldiers are at war for us
As the rich stay safe among their houses
Many living in neighborhoods they cannot trust
Just as orphans are making wishes.

Drugs will make your brain cells cease
Depression hurts; makes your wrists bleed red.
Our world is slowly beginning to decrease;
Thoughts of suicide run through a heartbroken teenager's head.

So many problems in the world going on,
Why do things have to be so wrong?

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dreamer_believer said...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 6:54 pm
oh my!! this is amazing :) i love it!! everything you wrote is SO true- it touches you in a really sad, yet gentle and effective way :) wow, this is really great! i love it :) 5 stars! would you mind checking out some of my work?
yeaaiitsemilyx3 replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 2:54 pm
thank you! yes i will check it out. thanks so muchh!
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