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Im standing in line with stuff ion my mind/
Searchiung to find some of my lunch money/
When I went in my bag searching to find/
Then my friend fell it was so, so funny/
Looking at all the good choices of the food/
Think I forgot my code will she be mad/
Hopefully the ladys in a good mood/
Then he dropped his tray this could be bad/
She came over with a mop and swept it up/
He went to the nurse to get a new shirt/ I went over to my tabel and said wassup/
Looking over at him he could be hurt/
I glanced at him through the glaring light/
he then gave me a smile shinning bright





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Milo! said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 7:44 am

Wow. It’s impossible not to be in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

 

 
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