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Sitting on the couch having some popcorn/
Eager for the Super Bowl to begin/
Cheering for my team honking the big horn/
Hearing the pads on the T.V. popin/
Saints and the Colts will go for victory/
Both teams are good but one must come out on top/
Only one team will make it history/
I hope each team will play untill they drop/
With almost no time left in gameplay/
The game will start to come down to the wire/
Everyone insists that they just stay/
I ran to throw more wood on the fire/
At the end of the game, my team had won/
All i know is that it was lots of fun





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IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 19, 2012 at 12:51 pm

I like how well the words were placed, it seemed pretty natural. Though, there are supposed to be 10 beats no more no less in one line, and "untill" is spelled "until". YOu did a very good job with this poem, keep it up!!!!!

Ps. please check out my work aswell, i love hearing feedback and getting rated! =:D

 
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